It features a bus.
http://patrickgarratt.blogspot.com/2012/02/to-simplify-my-love.html
My latest short story.
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I like your writing Pat, it flows well. I would love to write for a living mainly for video games but have no clue how a game script is structured or how to get noticed. My ex girlfriends dad was a freelance for Brookside and Corrie but asking him for advice was about as useful as gluing your penis to a car door.
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That was pretty good. A hell of a lot of comas and semi-colons. Interesting how your simply describing in short sentences for almost the hole time.
I'm actually thinking of writing a full book but I know I'll just make a complete hash of it so I've never really gotten very far. Shame cos I think its a pretty good idea for a story.Posted 1 year ago # -
A great book in which you can take inspiration from is a book wrote by J.K rowling and its called Very Hungry Caterpiller very beautiful and uplifting.
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Thanks for reading it :D
I love The Very Hungry Caterpillar. I sleep with a copy under my pillow.
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http://www.theonion.com/articles/sad-sack-purchases-screenwriting-software,17254/
Your bit when the rumour of an ico re-master was announced was awesome though
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I will never stop. Sad sack will win or die.
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Heh, that wasn't supposed to be discouraging :) I apologise if it was. Creativity should never be crushed
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It's impossible to crush me. I will succeed and win the world of writing. It's written. So shall it be.
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It's a little too heavy for me. Or a lot too heavy.
I always felt like the critical thing when it came to literature wasn't in making sure you're shown every little detail in the scene - But that the most important things are presented clearly. For me it's always more about progressing the story.
What makes reading great to me is filling in all those little blanks that are left out, and building them around the important pieces in those written images. Story, characters, setting, mood.
I like thinking that those scenes may look completely different in the heads of any individual reading them - And sometimes I misread something, and the scene turns out completely differently. Then when I'm talking to someone about it afterwards, we're describing different scenes based on the fact that I read something wrong.
And that's why writing rocks :P
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